E- Commerece Reassesment: About us/ Story
I researched some competitors websites such as Kasu and The Handmade Soap company.
upon my research i made my own about us story saying
I am a young entrepreneur starting my own business. i am passionate about the essential oils and scents hence bringing it together in the products. All the products are handmade.
This needs more commentary and more depth - there isn't enough here to say you've actually researched the about pages, or shown what you have taken from them to create and write your own.
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